Great start and useful statistics! For your revision, I would advocate providing fewer stats and placing them in broader perspective … what are you trying to communicate? The last row, for example, suggests that Nigerian immigrants are well-educated professionals. The other rows suggest high numbers of Nigerian immigrants, but you don’t provide many comparisons to other groups of immigrants, and it’s not clear what the “remittances” means. Think about your overarching message, such as “Nigerian immigrants are a large population engaged in education and professional work,” outline that at the top, and then provide some stats to back up the claim(s). Let me know if this makes sense!
Great start and useful statistics! For your revision, I would advocate providing fewer stats and placing them in broader perspective … what are you trying to communicate? The last row, for example, suggests that Nigerian immigrants are well-educated professionals. The other rows suggest high numbers of Nigerian immigrants, but you don’t provide many comparisons to other groups of immigrants, and it’s not clear what the “remittances” means. Think about your overarching message, such as “Nigerian immigrants are a large population engaged in education and professional work,” outline that at the top, and then provide some stats to back up the claim(s). Let me know if this makes sense!
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